Parapet Colour

First of all: This was not drawn by me!
This is an awesome drawing by KatiBu [link]
The link to the lineart is [link]

Second of all: I did the colour (or, well, the lack thereof). I was going to do a full colour, but then i realised it was going to be too much work! And also when I start colouring I seem to lose the sense of depth. So I decided to just convert what i had to gray scale.
There are parts I'm not satisfied with (concerning shadows, etc.) Esspecially the thingie behind her left arm (from her point of view) looks weird. Otherwise I'm rather satisfied with the end product - It's SO totally NOT what I had in mind! But oh well

I hope i did it justice!

*Comments welcome. I was experimenting with style. Would like to know what you think I could have done with the background? (i SucK at those!)* - *just dont be rude*